What do you think of this poem?
I wrote this when I was twelve, when I thought emo was the best writing in the world. For couples with a piece of writing (around my brother and I growing apart, when we were once great friends, for anyone curious), but I was wondering what you think about it in general. A second time, Blink and gone. Comply with the masses, must remain strong. World falling apart, time stretching, waiting dawn, while leaving its mark, you must stay strong. Pressure eroding what had been built, so long waiting for something to do well. Must stay strong. Roaming the landscape green, Looking for some place where she belongs. Seeking an escape, must remain strong. tears again, it's all so wrong. When will it end? Must stay strong. No brother to comfort her, no one to help along. Their friendship is no longer pure, but she must remain strong.
I think your poem is very good 
Please read mine. Thank you. Christiemotz.webs.com
RoGBC – Green Building Training: Stephen Scrivens, Landscape Technology – segment 2 of 3
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